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Broken down but I'm still feeling
Can't stop this love can't stop this bleeding
When all of love has turned to hate
Who am I to debate

Torn in two I remain as one
But pull the strings and I'll sure be done
This broken heart
It's still beating
A warped lullaby that it's still healing

You torment me withought speaking
With unheard words that you're not thinking

And why I cry, why I cry
When it is I,
I who pulls the strings

The carriage, it still rides
down hills of pain and sorrow
And at the corner of each eye
Are the mounds of snow we borrow
Tommorow brings new worries
With burdens we all carry

But who am I to debate
When I pull the strings of fate

And in death we do soon realize
The mistakes that we all make
©2007-2009 ~CraZyGrEeNHyENa
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A poem I wrote a few days ago but is now how I'm feeling, I'm not gonna take the time to explain it, maybe later, but now I don't feel like it

poem (c) me(ax)

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:iconalexthekitsune:
Hmmm..Was this the poem you told me in 3rd hour a couple of days ago?

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You can't spell grape without rape :halfliquid:
:iconcrazygreenhyena:
well, now i know for sure that you weren't listening -_-;

yes it was

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~matetrix112 <3

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:iconalexthekitsune:
I was listening...I was too busy on that trade with Kimmy

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You can't spell grape without rape :halfliquid:
:iconcrazygreenhyena:
hmmmmm....-.-;

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~matetrix112 <3

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:iconalexthekitsune:
What?

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You can't spell grape without rape :halfliquid:
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:iconalexthekitsune:
Aww..I'm sorry :hug:

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You can't spell grape without rape :halfliquid:
:iconbecky-kazama-flores:
:( really nice poem

i kind of feel the same way :cry:

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Dark,Shallow,Scary and Black
The girl that wears only one color
She's mean, She's evil, She's all about HATE
She's someone you can't underestimate...

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Me----> :glomp: <----Gaara
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